After participating in the demanding A to Z Challenge last month, I have begun to enjoy blogging challenges. I love letting my creativity tackle the prompts provided in blog trains and challenges. The #BookBlogTrain Season 2 is a book-lover’s dream, with a rich variety of book related topics to choose from.
One of the prompts is to “Write a poem using – books, read, love, coffee”. I have written poems on my blog before, but I wanted to try something new this time with Haiku poetry.
Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry writing that is traditionally written in a fixed syllabic format of 5-7-5. This means the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 and the third rounds off with 5 again. This in itself is difficult to implement successfully, but a genuine Haiku must also express a sentiment of ‘opposition’.
Haiku literally means “cutting word”, and signifies the juxtaposition of two ideas or images. With a limited number of words/syllables to work with, this separation becomes harder to emphasise. However, what is hard is also fun- at least in the creative sphere!
Today, I have written 5 Haiku, one for each word given in the prompt and one combining all words. Though modern Haiku poets don’t necessarily stick to the 5-7-5 syllable rule, I have stayed true to the formula for each. I would love to know your thoughts, and would love to read your Haiku if you attempt to write any.
Happy reading!
BOOKS:
Books transport to lands
of countless wonders despite
their minuscule size
READ:
Read because you can
open the doors of the world
while sitting at home
LOVE:
True love is not a
comfortable ride for sure
but is worth each bump
COFFEE:
Coffee is a vice
that offers many pleasures
Good cheer in a cup!
LIFE:
When life’s difficult
I love to read good books and
enjoy good coffee
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As an example, I’m including the syllable count of the last poem “Life”:
1 + 1 + 3
1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1
2 + 1 + 2
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Damn amazing poem! How I wish, I can also write one, but nonetheless, you really penned the thoughts beautifully. Great blog! 🙂
Thank you! It’s actually 5 poems.. A Haiku is an entire poem in itself 😊
Glad you liked it! Thank you for stopping by 🙂
Well Hiku is new for me
But i will try
I love poetry
And i should try this
Hope you will help me
Informative post for me
Of course I’ll help you!
Pick a topic and write a line which has 5 syllables.
For example:
Your first line here has 7 syllables:
Well (1) + Hai – ku (2) + is (1) + new (1) + for (1) + me (1)
Your second one has 4, and your third one has 5
I (1) + love (1) + po- e- try (3).
Now you try making one in a 5-7-5 format, dividing into syllables (sounds) 😃
I think I can do
I can write a good Hai-Ku
Tell me what to do
Is it right?
Yes it’s right in terms of syllables, so yay!
But there has to be some sort of opposition expressed. So maybe something like:
“I thought I could not
write haiku but I found that
I totally can”
😃
Okie understand
I will write now something and then share on twitter with you
Great looking forward to it
This is such a nice post!
Thanks for sharing this. I’ll try Haiku too 😀
Yes you must! It’s a lot of fun 😃
Woha fabulous Noor you are a poet and you know it….Haiku something new i learnt. My favourite is the last one. Wow you bowled me.over
Glad you liked them Sharvari 😃
Wow, Noor! This is awesome. I haven’t tried Haiku ever. You made this form of Japanese poetry so easy.
It’s fun! You should try it 😃
Haiku is often mistaken by many people, you’ve explained it the right way. as for me, I’ve written quite a few poems but never tried Haiku. Would love to try it
Would love to read yours Jhilmil! It’s such fun
Haiku is new for me but I really loved the way u explained, it looks great to express the emotions in words.
Great blog!!
Thank you 😊
Nice poat dear, I love poetry and Haiku is new for me but this looks amazing.
Its fun! You should try it!
You are a smart and tactful writer Noor. I never understood Haiku nor the poetry. Just not my area to dwell on, but am amazed by the way you made it sound so easy peasy.
When you come up with ficition writing challenge, ping me up. I am all game for ficition or flash ficition write ups.
I’m not hosting this one, but I don’t mind hosting one in the future- i love fiction and flash fiction!
Let me plan 😃
This is awesome Noor, I love poetry but haiku is new for me.
Glad you liked it
I didn’t know about Haiku but you explained nicely. I love poetry and I am a fan of your writing style too. You make everything very interesting with your words. Lovely read Noor. God bless you. I want to learn also.
Thank you Deepika! You should try it.. It’s quite easy.
Just follow the rule of 5-7-5 as per sounds of words.
Ok, I will try. Thanks for explaining.
Wow! This is really amazing. I loved the poem. This post is very unique.
Thanks! It’s actually 5 poems. Each Haiku (of 3 lines) is a poem in itself 🙂
Nice poetry dear Haiku is new for me this is really nice post I will surely try haiku
Yes it’s quite fun
Woah!! I will also try attempting to make some haikus of my own! Yours are surely amazing!
Thank you! You must try 😊
The new concept is really amazing
Thank you! But the concept is ancient! I’ve just tried it for the first time
Haiku is new to me but love the way you have explained it, making it look so easy. I liked all the 5 haiku poems you wrote using the prompts. Great job!
Thank you Neha!
Wow you write poems too! You are truely a versatile writer. These haikus are amazing! Would like to check out more.
Thank you 😊
Always delightful reading your posts. Yet another interesting one that had me hooked till the end.
Thank you
Have always been fascinated by Haiku. They say so much in so few words. Reading your Haiku poems, getting inspired, may be will pen a few soon !
Yes you must! It’s fun!
Haiku is new for me never heard it before. Good to learn something new today from you. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Glad you liked it 😊
I liked the way you attempted Haiku on the prompts.
I have an ebook on Haiku poetry.
Thank you! I would love to check it out! Where can I access it?
You are an extremely talented Writer. I love how you have used Haiku in this blog. Great job there.
Thank you 😊
Oh dear, this poem is amazing. Taking up challenge is one thing. But you have taken up a challenge inside a challenge, A Haiku. That’s fantastic. Good luck👍
Thank you! Glad you liked it, it’s actually 5 poems- each Haiku is a poem in itself 😊
Wow that’s awesome poetry, haiku is new to me and learning new things is always good
Glad you liked it!
Books and coffee is a great combination and I too an avid reader. I can forget everything when I am with books. This blog series looks amusing to me.
Yes my favourites too!
I am a huge fan of your writing skills, honestly you can actually make a scene appear in front of someones eyes, I am definitely sharing this link ahead.
Wow thank you!
Wow I just love reading Haiku, loved the one on love the most.. i always fail to write one.. do share some tips
It’s fun.. do try it. Start by making short sentences based on sounds, count the sounds to keep 5-7-5 format 😊
Noor …you always surprise me…I really loved the way you pen down your thoughts…I have heard of Haiku ..thought once to participate but never done
Thank you!
You should give it a try, it’s fun
Loved your Haikus girl. I admit I have read many before but these are much different from those that I had read but yes convey great messages for the readers.
Thank you Roma
This is so interesting! I actually didn’t know the original way Haiku is practiced. Learned something new today. And very impressed with how you wrote each poem with the exact number of syllables.
Thank you 😊
Noor, you have written a good series of Haiku, the best one to me is “Read”.
Keep exploring and Keep writing.
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
That’s well done Noor. All 5 poems are great.
Thank you
That is so interesting. i am definitely gonna try this once.Thanks for letting us know about this form of poetry. And you’ve written it beautifully. 🙂
Thank you!
Noor, you are master of everything. I love reading your atoz challenges blog and now this new concept – poem
Thank you! Glad you like it
Amazing. Didn’t know about Haiku.. that there are any formats of writing poems. Your writing skills are marvellous. Keep writing and sharing!!
Thank you dear Kinshoo! You are too kind 🤗
I always wanted to know more about this and here i find one of the best blog describing Haiku in the best way
Glad you liked it!
This is so good . Great attempt for.the haiku
Thank you!
I have had always loved Haiku and have been in awe of people who write these.
Believe me, I am amazed by your selection of the words and the syllables woven around it.
Thank you!
Wow! Thanks for detailed information on Haiku. I will definitely going to try this. This is new for me and today I learnt something new
👍
This is really amazing and beautiful. You have brilliantly sum up the essence in the limited words. Glad to found you 🙂
Thank you Sheetal! So glad you liked it!
Your sense of writing is amazing. All the best
Thanks
Haiku
Love all 5 poems n a poem in itself.. U penned them beautifully
Thank you
This is amazing. Loved this Japanese style 😍
Thank you
I have heard about Haiku but never read it or tried it
Amazing your way of expression and I loved the poems.
Thank you 😊
Loved the haikus. They are really simple with in depth meanings
Thank you 😊
Incredible poem… I’m gonna try Haiku too
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Haiku.
That’s something I wasn’t aware of. Got to know it now. Loved it.
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Thank you.. glad you liked it
Such a lovely post,thanks for sharing.
Glad you liked it
got to learn such a cool new thing through this blog. Amazing poetry style! The poems you have written are great.
Thank you
Wow! I am really impressed by this Haiku format and love your poems too. I will definitely try one.
Glad you liked them!