Today I woke up in the morning and found…
That strangely, the Earth had ceased to be round
It seemed the heavens in their wisdom decided
That circular shaped planets were quite misguided
A square setting is the way it should be
All the occupants living in a box-like TV
I tried rising from bed but immediately fell down
Rolling on the floor, I felt quite the clown
Holding the bedstead, I managed to stand
My morning adventures had never been this grand
If I could stand easily when the earth was round,
then in its square state, why must I fall to the ground?
This question played uppermost in my mind
as my mother entered the room to begin the day’s grind
A rope tied ‘round her waist, the end held in her hand
This contraption it seemed, was helping her stand
Feeding me a tall glass of milk was her mission,
No matter the circumstances, she wouldn’t change this tradition
“Mum!” I said, “what’s happening here?!”
Pulling the rope tight, she replied, “don’t worry, my dear!
This happens every ninth year, on the fourth Saturday of January.
Us grown-ups are used to this- it’s really not scary.
There’s a rope beneath your bed, tie it round your waist,
It’ll help you move around. Quick, make haste!”
Apparently with a heavy binding tight round my core,
This new Earth’s convoluted gravity wouldn’t make my head sore
As an 8-year-old, I’d never seen this wonder
Never known of Earth’s quirky, phenomenal blunder
“In that case, is there a holiday from school?”
I hoped against hope, playing the fool
“Of course not, my dear! Today is your English test
No matter the situation, you must give it your best.”
I groaned, inwardly thinking, “this just isn’t cool!
What’s the point of the Earth being square, if we don’t get off from school!”
Struggling with the rope, I asked mom to help me
Instead of tying it up, however, she began to shove and shake me
“Wake up! It’s past 7 am. Wake up, Gul!
You’re once again going to be late for school!”
As I rose from that delirious dream
I realised my mind had designed an elaborate scheme
To skip the dreaded English test today
But no dream could keep harsh reality at bay
Secretly though I was happy, as I stood with my feet on the ground
That the Earth was still firm and steadfastly round!
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I hope you enjoyed my attempt at creative poetry from a child’s point of view. Do share this poem with others that may enjoy it and read it to your little ones too!
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This post is a part of Blog Anniversary celebrations of Thoughts by Geethica Turns 3 co-hosted by Zainab and Ashvini. I have written on the prompt “Today, I got up in the morning and found….”
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Wonderfully crafted and enjoyable!
Thank you so much 🙂
Interesting!! I wish atleast half of those childhood dreams (during exam time) would have come to reality.. The best thing about dreams is there is no limit to one’s creativity and imagination. You can go to weirdest places and still come back smiling…
Haha so true! Thank you for reading!
Lovely interpretation of a child’s thoughts..Loved the idea.. 😊 The rope bit was hilarious but an interesting adjustment in such a situation .Great imagination..Children will love this poem..
Thank you so much 🙂
Such a lovely imagination Noor
Thank you so much!
A fun poem full of innocence and simplicity of childhood. Very creative indeed!
Thank you so much 🙂 So glad you liked it!
wow! what a poem, that is why I admire you , your grasp on word is beyond imagination and word weaving at it’s best.
Thank you so much Anurag!
I loved the way a child’s thoughts are interpreted and explained . . This poem truly explains the vibrant mind of child .. So many dreams and expectations without any limits.
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
This is so much Noor.
V well written.
Imagine falling down when we set our foot down
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Thanks Zainab!
That’s a lovely poem, Loved the imagination and creativity in the rhyming poses.
Lately your poetry is really getting interesting. Keep Rhyming.
Thank you Pragun 🙂
Your poem has reminded me my childhood days Noor, and I love the way you had beautifully expressed it with magical words. Such a creative write up.
Thank you Surbhi!
Wow I was also imagining waking up and having a rope tied to my waist. Haha. That was an awesome poem with vivid imaginations. Hats off.
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
I just loved your creativity, the poem is fun and interesting. we all understand this feeling of trying to run away from exam.
Thank you! So glad you liked it!
Very good attempt at children’s poem, Noor. It was actually intriguing and I was glued to read the end until I realised it was a dream.
Thank you Geethica 🙂 Glad you liked it!
That is a very refreshing stringing of words Noor….I am sure your son must be inspiring you.:)
Haha! Yes always- he’s my biggest inspiration!
You have nailed it. Your best creative side for sure. Plus it is very different from your writing style. Loved it.
Thank you dear! I don’t write much poetry but I do enjoy it once in a while 🙂
So creative! I totally enjoyed it and ended up with a silly smile on my face!
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Wonderfully expressed. Nature knows nothing but the best.
Thank you!
Oh my! You’re a talented poet Noor. Hoping to read more from you. Love your thought process on the state of earth not being round.
Thank you so much!
Amazing and insightful post. The poem is beautifully penned down. Loved the rhythm and imagination expressed. Great thoughts.
Thank you
Loved your creativity with words. I used to write poems as well; it was a wonderful way of expression.
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Your every work is commendable. Every time you create good art. The poem is definitely beautiful. Great job.
Thank you
I never knew that you are such a wonderful poet! Loved reading this piece!
Thank you
This is a beautiful poem Noor.. I was smiling yhrougthrowhike reading.. u have beautifully explained a child’s imagination
Thank you 🙂
Poem really so creative and fun to read. I am happy that earth is not square.
🙂
That’s is very creatively and thoughtfully written poem. I have always loved to read such poems, irrespective of the fact if that is written for minors.
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
That was indeed a very good attempt and full marks to you for doing justice to a child’s imagination, curiously and creativity 🙂
A wonderful and quite a hilarious poem 🙂
Thank you Narinder! Glad you liked it!
Such a creative post, Noor. Simple and innocent about childhood and the weird dreams and thoughts we had. After all happy to do anything so that we don’t have to give the test in school. Loved it as always 🙂
Thanks Arushi 🙂
This is just an amazing poem and I can feel you. Loved it I remember my childhood now too good. Feel blessed
Thank you so much 🙂
Super sweet poem ! Imagination at it’s best, Well rhymed dream from the lil innocent eyes of a child I had smile on my face throughout the reading.
Loved your attempt on poetry Noor! Keep writing more poems .
Thank you so much! So glad you liked it!
For a minute I was so disturbed. But when I went with the flow I quite enjoyed what you wrote. So creative Noor.
Thank you so much 🙂 Glad you liked it!
Loved your imagination and rhyming words used. The innocence of childhood can be felt with the poem.
Thank you!
a lovely phase of childhood now in the form of poem loved it beautifully written…
Thank you!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.The choice of words and the thought s expressed through it.Not only Kids but the a child in every adult will love it too.
(Snehalata Jain)
I’m so glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Oh, this was so cute! Kids give excuses to skip tests but this one went a step ahead and changed the world for it. Nicely written, Noor!
Thank you Varsha! Glad you liked it!
That’s a v intelligent weave Noor, I am enthralled to see your poetic side, may we meet soon.
Yes we must! Let’s set something up in January. Thank you so much for appreciating!
You weave words so beautifully. A very creative way of portraying a child’s imagination.
Thank you so much for appreciating!
This is a beautiful attempt for writing this poem for kids. I love the innocence shared with the words.
Glad you liked it!
Loved your creative approach Noor! A lovely poem from the kid’s point of the view.Want to listen more from you.
Thank you 🙂
WOW. This is truly amazing. I am going to read this to Milie & Buddy tonight. They are going to be so amazed, I am sure.
Thank you so much! You just put the biggest smile on my face!
What a brilliant thought of depicting it from a child’s view! It gave me the feeling of innocence .
Glad you liked it 🙂
This is so well written and shared seriously the message in nice way !!I simply loved this
Thank you dear!
you have written some beautiful lines. very nicely done.
Thank you
Noor, you took me back to my childhood, loved the poetic lines.
Thank you!
Thats really cute. It feels like my childhood dreams and fantasies being expressed through the lines.
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So imaginative and lovely read, a child’s viewpoint expressed so well!
Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂